For home links this week I practiced show don’t tell. I did this to improve my skills for our narrative writing.
1: She was mad.
She felt the hatred flow through her body as her face started to turn red. Her hands clenched into a fist as she let out a loud yell.
2: He was happy.
His face brightened up and the dimples in his cheek showed.
3: The girl was happy when she found out she got a kitten.
The girl’s face was overflowing with joy as her new four legged pal, purred in her arms.
4: The boy had a sore bleeding knee.
The boy sat on the ground, screaming with tears rolling down his cheeks, as the gash on his knee bled.
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